Ident 3

Ident 3 from emily fairbank on Vimeo.

I think the improvement to the ending makes all the difference to ident - I have kept the pink circle from one of the previous tester indents. The ending is also much longer in this ident than the previous tester on, making the whole composition feel less rushed.
I have also moved the two circle photographs that show in the middle section of the ident, so that they are both places over each of the vinyls making the whole composition appear more balanced. If I was to do this ident over again I think I would just have two of the photos and maybe add more text to this.
I am please with how the text comes out - I think this is what makes the ident.