Feedback on 5 Boards

We were put in groups of 5 and in those groups we had to go through our boards, explain what and how we were going proceed with the brief. 

STRENGTHS

- Date / Time and channel is spot on

- Solid Research

- Love the idea for the indents

- Transition from day to night to show the change in atmosphere and colour scheme. 

WEAKNESSES

- Get the year right...2012 not 2011!

- Be more precise in what you want to create; biggest bands to best festivals, logo's etc

- Narrow down the swatch pallet 

- Categorise colours with the type of festival

ACTION TO BE TAKEN

 

- More defined statement; type of animation, list of festivals, type of subject, define target audience

- Sound; indents designed around sound so chose audio now

- Typefaces; check that they work in motion

- Facts & Figures, Images, Vectors; chose which ones you want to use.