Monday, 23 May 2011

Speaking From Experience - Crit Feedback

Results of the crit

PROBLEM ANALYSIS - GOOD

  • relate more to this course rather than to just graphics
  • aesthetically graphic related
  • hard to read in some areas
  • maybe include more visuals/images
  • inspire
  • rework notes on intendance e.g. 85% attendance
CONTEXTUAL UNDERSTANDING - GOOD
  • fairly simple advice - keep tone of voice consistant throughout 
  • clearer problem, quotes & statistics, make more relevant/specific to the course
RESEARCH
  • I didn't bring my research/blog research to the brief - N/A
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS
  • maybe try lower case - easier to read (the type i chose only encrypts in uppercase
  • could condense into a single book
  • colours are nice, work well as a set
  • more info on each pack but dont over complicate
  • could change the counter space to make the type easier to read

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