1st Progress Crit Feedback

Having slightly struggled to set out a plan of what I am doing without overly complicating the indents I came up with a few ideas which were then critted today;

STRENGTHS

- Presuming the animations are going to be photography based

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT

- Select a more general typeface that could maybe work across all the genres

- Try not to jump between too many scenes within a sequence, try and focus more on 1 / a few

CONSIDERATIONS

- In the crowd shots, break the imagery up in photoshop as this will make it easier to animate

- Consider time scale, if everything happens too fast it may make it harder to understand that it is about festivals

- Try use iconic imagery in the sequence for the festival that is being shown as it will make it more obvious to the festival father than just any festival

- Consider different ways to change scene in a sequence as the black scenes may not be the best idea.